I really liked the intro and how it evolved, but I just think that the piece seems to be missing that epic finale that it builds up and encourages. I'd recommend filling the finale with perhaps more brass, percussion and strings to compliment to the melody. Felt quite empty and mild with just the minor strings and horns doing the main act. But overall, I think it's a beautiful piece.
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