Ah, most promising song up to date!!! I like it!!
bad note at 0:12, 0:19, 0:25, 0:32, 0:39, 0:46, 0:53, 1:00, 1:06 and 1:13 : B would be more apropriated (if I'm not mistaking... lol!)
At 0:06, you return at the same notes as your first bar, it feels akward.
Really promising!!!! now GO!!