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Author Comments

A genre I have not touched on in a very long time. Currently the song is in very early stages and I would like feedback as soon as possible. To help me improve the track. It was originally going to be a loop, so I will be expanding the track a bit longer because of the feedback my mother gave me.


Ah, most promising song up to date!!! I like it!!

bad note at 0:12, 0:19, 0:25, 0:32, 0:39, 0:46, 0:53, 1:00, 1:06 and 1:13 : B would be more apropriated (if I'm not mistaking... lol!)

At 0:06, you return at the same notes as your first bar, it feels akward.

Really promising!!!! now GO!!

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BowserThedestructive responds:

alright ill see which note fits better for those parts you gave me, thanks it is a really helpful. I want to make something with more emotion, this song shall be the ticket.

My advice would be to add an instrument in the bass section,like cello or strings in the low register.I think it would make the overall song more "complete"

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BowserThedestructive responds:

Thanks, also the main instrument for the song is a dark violin, I do have strings but I will try to add some lower octaves then.

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Credits & Info

4.31 / 5.00

Jul 1, 2012
6:40 PM EDT
File Info
2.9 MB
1 min 16 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.