Ah, most promising song up to date!!! I like it!!
bad note at 0:12, 0:19, 0:25, 0:32, 0:39, 0:46, 0:53, 1:00, 1:06 and 1:13 : B would be more apropriated (if I'm not mistaking... lol!)
At 0:06, you return at the same notes as your first bar, it feels akward.
Really promising!!!! now GO!!
alright ill see which note fits better for those parts you gave me, thanks it is a really helpful. I want to make something with more emotion, this song shall be the ticket.
My advice would be to add an instrument in the bass section,like cello or strings in the low register.I think it would make the overall song more "complete"
Thanks, also the main instrument for the song is a dark violin, I do have strings but I will try to add some lower octaves then.