Started off slow and was about to dismiss it, but something kept me around. Maybe it was the faint familiarity to it. Regardless, I'm glad I did, because it grew on me very quickly. Every transition seemed beautifully timed.
I'm no music person, so I can't really give you advice on that front, but I can say that I thoroughly enjoyed this.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.