It got pretty good when it got to the bass drop at 2:01. The begining was a little to slow, naybe get rid of some of the vocals. They didn't really help the song that much. Other than that good song, good job bro!
I added the vocals cuz i thought it added to the theme of the song, but i think i know what your saying bro. Thanks though! That drop took like an hour to make!
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