Good Effort
Nice try man work a little harder though
Full on swirling madness.
Good Effort
Nice try man work a little harder though
Thanks to your unbelievably helpful comment, my musical career will be saved.
I especially liked the specific comments on the areas that need improvement.
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Nice try man work a little harder though
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