I very much liked the message conveyed, the structure in which it was done so, and the voice work, but as for the diction, I felt there could have been better wording in line 4 of stanza 5,
as well as lines 4 and 5 of stanza 4. Great wordplay otherwise.
Also, I don't think "ambivently" is a word.
I'm not much of a poet, so here is something someone else scribbled:
"Death most resembles a prophet who is without honor in his own land or a poet who is a stranger among his people."