Not good :(
Are you new?
You need alot more body, rythim and feeling towards that song. Make it a little longer and add a climax. By listening by some of the better entries you'll see, eh heir what I mean.
I was new back in the day mate.. gotta start somewhere :) check the date, 5 yrs ago!
i kinda liked this one
not bad. but kinda popcorn..thingy...lol