Hey! glad you liked it! And If I may "counter attack" or explain those 2 issues so that you can understand my point of view in making this track.
1) This song is actually VERY organized compared to what I usually do, this track was made for someone else's project so I couldn't go totally crazy :D but I always strive to have big dynamical changes through my songs, I'm not the biggest fan of tracks that kinda just linger. And I like to put in small melodies here and there that can be discovered with repeated listens. All music I release sounds exactly as I want it to sound.
2)The "Inconsistency" that you feel is probably the big dynamic changes that I like to do. I always try to give several dimensions to each track in order to get more of an epic flow of change. start a track in one state of mind, then bring it to another dimension and then BAM! bring it back again :D I love that in music, it keeps me and hopefully the listener interested. My music is always created with the intent that it can and should be heard as a stand alone track as well as fit the game it is meant for. I focus on being original and not follow rules set by others and making music that I myself wish to listen to, and if other ppl can enjoy what i create then BONUS!!
This became kind of a long response so i just wanna say: Thank you for giving me the opportunity to say a little about how I work :D