Your label says techno, but the techno elements of the song are scarce and not very noticeable, changing it to a vocal tag would get a better reception as well. You also say that it's a remix, but you only made the lyrics more noticeable and stripped the instrumentation and dynamic level of the original, this is more of a cover.
Eeeyyyyhhhhh... It's very, very OK. While the vocals are alright, the music is just barely noticeable, almost like listening to an instrumental. I suppose it's alright if you're into songs with more vocals than an actual tune, but it's just not for me.
Well, you seized the day and made this. Epic song, by the way.
This Remix is Six Times better that orginal. :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.