It's not bad, but it needs more variation. Like, I really liked the beginning, but it felt almost like a loop after a while. I pretty much just agree with the other guy.

This is not bad, drums are enjoyable, but it needs more variation and more energy i think. Also, you could use more instruments, and i hear one tune for the whole song, you could make a chorus/bridge/verse, or something else. Let me use an example, you visit a country, and you are amazed, then you visit again and again, and again, its not so special than the first time right? To be a 4 min song, it needs variation! Well this sounds more different, orchestral sounds with house, heh, this is the first time i hear something like this :P. To be the first time it sounds good, we all have to make the first step somewhere ;). I liked this, keep your work mate!