Very nice hook, the song then proceeds to continue layering upon itself with new rhythms while still maintaining that continuous bass line. There wasn't anything too catchy throughout however and could work as a loop if it was a shorter clip but is still incomplete as a song.
It needs something that sticks out from the repeated-ness.
All in all, you have some good foundations with basic techno beats but it still needs something to make it more unique.
Thanks for the nice song!