It works well as a loop, but right now I'm listening to it for the forth time...and...it's starting to get annoying. I think if you take this and make it at at least four mins. long it could be something. I'm curious was this done on the computer or a synth? It has real potential but as is, isn't quite up to a 4 or 5* rank.
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