I like the slight BT Stutter thing that seems to happen after every kick. I think the jingles are a bit loud. The string/synths that come in at :42 sound really really cool. Like the melody, but I really like the way the instrument sounds. The snares kinda bored me. I think you could find a drum sample with a bit more personality, maybe a bit more crunchiness. Same with the hats. Kick is fine though, it sounds cool.
Advice taken. I just downloaded some harder samples to use for my next song. And the jingles (I assume you mean the music box sound thingy) wasn't that loud to begin with. It somehow increased in volume when I converted it into MP3. But I'm really glad you liked it and i'm gonna try to make my next one heavier, Just for you :P
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