ThaKidd wrapped it up in a nutshell, excellent review. At first, I was waiting for it to take off as it was a decent start, but it just didn't get better and then I was bored 20 seconds in.

You got some nice sounds in there. Not a big fan of the bass though, way too repetitive.
A lot of the sounds are pretty repetitive, but the bass is annoying and repetitive.

Drums need some work. Look up some hip hop drum patterns, yours are a little weird (but hey, I like weird patterns, check out my songs) but it doesn't work out.

I'd still say this is a pretty solid work though! Just has a lot of possible improvement, therefore earning 7/10!

When it first came on, everything sounded cool, but as things started progressing, I lost a feel for the beat, which was something I seen going a different way. Ima be honest, I work on FL too, and it's hard making something from scratch, I still got projects that I haven't even finished since I was like 15, so it's usually hit or miss for me.

Another thing is that it got really repetitive, really quick. To the point where I fast=forwarded to see if it changed up a bit, but it didn't. I usually don't submit reviews but since you're just starting on the NG, I thought I might drop a few tips, because I was at the point you was about 2 years ago.

Switch it up whenever you can, develop your own formula and listen to the Greats, they know what they were doing. It's what I did, good luck bro.