Though the mixing and synth choices are not ideal, there is a melody to this. I'd say if you worked on the mixing a lot with this song and changed the synths, this could be a very nice track. You'd need to add some harmony of course as well.
Precisely with the mixing, you'd want to make sure there wasn't complete silence in between notes unless you're trying to grab the listener's attention for something upcoming, and even then that technique should be used rarely. You'd also want to make sure the track has a good balance of bass, mid, and treble, though you may choose to slightly favor one to give the song the right feeling.
Other than all that, this track shows potential!
I'll work on it, thank you for your constructive criticism!
try to develop a sense of form when you compose
compressing the kick and cutting of some low frequencies while bringing up its mid freq. will really make it sound good.
panning is a good way to give each instruments spaces
Ok, thank you.
Sloppy notes, the timing is abit off. When you kick in two instruments their rhythms contradict and don't sound too well. They end up overlapping each other and it doesn't sound natural. The (I assume) drums can sound abit more natural if you make them quieter so they don't overshadow the main instrument. You can then sync them more properly with the main rhythm. They seem to be doing their own thing.
ty for your criticism, I will work on it in my next song