is it ok if i use this 4 something
Pretty nice for your first time.
pretty good! Overall, really digging the sound. especially the stab type synths at 1:20.
I've got only 2 recommendations. First is that overall, it seems fairly repeptitive. Some parts seem to go on a couple bars longer than they should. Second is that the instruments go together really well, but the drums kinda stick out more than they probably should in this type of genre. perhaps just lower the volume on them just a touch, and maybe add a tad of reverb to make them seem more blended in.
Besides that, really nicely done! 4/5. 7/10.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.