You got a nice melody, and some awesome synths to wash it down. The drums were nice. The main problem you have here is that the song is repetitive, especially your percussion. Easy fix: just add some similar melodies and transitions to help keep the song interesting. Also your ending was abrupt and could have been drawn out more or something of that nature. Did just fine anyways, too bad somebody gave you a zero for your work, it's worth something more.
You know this is still my work. And I waiting on my mate. He is in France and he don't come back yet. So, i do fast song for chilling, not serious listening. I'm still learning. But I think, It's coming soon. ;) Stay tuned, and you will see ;)
I love this fast-paced percussion,but i have to say this actually hurt my ears a bit.
Pardon me :)