Sounds unfinished.
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it took me forever to get the end to sound right, and i'm still not satisfied with it...
Best track 2006.
In all honesty your stuff in 2009 is pretty kewl and whatnot.
You used those stock ass vocal effects from FL studio?
Way too simple
The song is way too simple. There's not enough melodies. Also, you might want to get rid of that annoying voice at the beginning of the song. When I first started using FL Studio (I'm not sure if that's what you're using, but judging by the sound of the voice you are) I used those all the time in my songs, and I have no fucking idea why the hell I did. They're annoying. Overall, the basic idea of the song is okay, it just needs to be beefed up a bit.
dj-xtatic-addict responds:
My knowledge with the program (Fruity Loops 5) is VERY limited. I STILL don't know how to edit how long a note is held, so I can only use the sounds that hold for a short time, thus limiting how much "hit" sounds I can add to the program; as oppose to "hold" sounds, like a whole note versus a quarter note. Or ambient sounds, for that matter.
I followed a tutorial up until I learned how to add sounds and edit the playlist. Then, I got too excited at my newfound discovery and started toying aroung with the program :)
I know EXACTLY what you mean by the basicness, and needing to be "beefed up". These are nowhere near finished results for my tracks, but as far as I am capable of doing, this is as good as they will get...for now. I do plan to go back and add to all my tracks once I learn more.
Thank you for the constructive criticism.
Err...
I didn't enjoy that at all. I doubt you tried as hard as you claimed you did, because that audio was rather atrocious.
Better luck next time.
dj-xtatic-addict responds:
This is something I just like to do in my free time. I know hardly anything about the program, except what I learn as I go.
Sorry you didn't like it, but thank you for taking the time to review.
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