good rap. but honestly, ur tryna be black in ur rap. "ur times up sucka?" sounds like something biggie would say.
get more originial bars. also im not a hater, just givin u criticsm
thats your opinion but im not trying to sound black, i didnt know "your times up sucka" is a trademarked phrase of the black community, ill make sure to do my research next time.
Nice song. Smooth raps, fluent use of beats , a true masterpiece this is .
all i gotta say is real recognize real. appreciate the love
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