Hey there. I just revisited this track and I think it's really, really really pretty. My only gripe is that it can be a little harsh on the ears sometimes and the sounds just kind of get lost. From a constructive viewpoint I would suggest trying to equalize and balance out the sounds if you can. Also, I'm going to be learning how to use AudioTools soon and I'd like to do a remix of this song :D Because it's super pretty and I love it a lot. Feel free to message me if you like :D Though I rarely get on NewGrounds, I'll try to remember to check back every now and then.