You did another great song...
I just want to comment on the audio software you're using. All your instruments sounds like old MIDI... So I guess it's what you're using.
I'm not too much knowledgeable about these softwares but I think it doesn't match up with your talent because while the melody is great, the instruments sound fakes.
As my roomate told me, while I was listening to your song, it sounds like 8-bit.
So, basically look for something which would match up with your talent, something which would render your songs sound like real live instruments.
Very good, you have talent. What program do you use by the way? Thanks.
Thanks. This one was made with Cakewalk Home Studio. Now I use Cakewalk Sonar.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.