If this is your first song, that's really amazing! There's a few things you can do, I don't know whether it's style or not but it seems like the synths seem cut short to the next note, also if you can hear something in the middle in the song that sounds like low popping noises, its your synths being a bit too loud, you can fix this by adding the fruity limiter from FL Studio to the main mixer. You can add more variations within the song because to me, it sounds a bit too repetitive, but that's okay! i have that problem too but if you can master it, you can make a 1 measure melody sound entrancing. Sorry for my bad English but I hope this helps.
Btw, can my bro remix this, the melody is amazing and what was the synth you used in the beginning :o
Wow! Thanks :D I used FL studio to make this. As for the problems thanks for pointing them out, I will fix them however I cant really share it as that would mean re uploading! Yeah sure your bro can remix it but if he uploads it anywhere (like youtube etc) then if you could just link this page saying this is the original :) As for the synths in the beginning is called a "z3ta" :) Also if your bro does remix it could you send me a link when its done? I would really like to hear it!
I MADE AN EDIT! Changed it up a little, thanks for your advice :) - http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/487767
This is downright upwards.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.