Well - it was good. But it was a little empty. Maybe you could add some more reverb on that pluck, also add a stronger percussion with that hat. And about that sweep - probably could clean it up just a little. So yeah more reverb, stronger kick, and more evolved melody.
Great feedback. It's definitely something I can use on my next track. The only problem is that these tracks I have uploaded have to stay as they are. I have no full-fledged producing programs to save the songs on. Just a demo of FL Studio.