There is far too much diversity in this track to call it simple. It starts off simple then sways off into various other directions. Personally I feel it didn't all mesh together. The rhythm was flawless meaning there was no offsetting noise. Like I said before it just feels too varied. I'll add you and this to my favorites to give you some critiquing every now and then. Best of luck to ya.
:) Thank you very much for your response bro.
I would define this track as a peaceful, wonderful summer beach... but at 2:45 Fred from the Flintstones starts dancing around naked and it becomes very off-putting.
Many thanks for constructive criticism.
How interesting. I love the guitar line. In fact, I thought it would be really neat if it were just a solo guitar track driving through the entire piece. The rockish part towards the end was a nice touch, but maybe mixed a little harsh. I like how the song overall doesn't stay in one place. It changes a lot in an atypical way. Great work!
Thank you so much for great insights. Yes my mixing is poor but trying. All lines are just flowing of my thoughts. Many thanks again and glad you liked it :)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.