A good song man, keep working on some of those long vocal note. [:
Eh, wasn't exactly fond of it. For one, it wasn't really "Grunge" music, it was a little too whiny for even that, and the simple chords and solo vocals, (which sounded a bit congested) with the semi-quality recording could be done by just too many people. Sorry, I suggest you call it a different genera.
On an up-note, you have musical potential.
To each to his own opinion, as far as NG recording quality is, this is pretty darn good.
Good job add more instruments
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.