Nice! The melody sounds very somber but beautiful. Some notes sound accidentally dropped into the mix, but most everything sounds fine. The last few seconds provide a decent ending.
Interesting title by the way! :)
I'm not really a Goth music connoisseur, but this is a nice tune. Personally, I didn't see much in the line of a true song, but it's a nice melody. I enjoyed listening to it. I did see this as a sad tune, but not really dark and Gothic. Also, the melody at the beginning was a bit out of step with the tempo, not sure if that's intentional, but I didn't like that as much. A few chords were out of tune, but hey, not a bad start!
I see this is your first song. Keep up the melodies, and add some other song elements such as drums and bass, and you may have a good song on your hands! :)