The first minute or so is pretty decent. However, I'm really not feeling the drop. There is a ton of distortion and it pretty much blocks out the rest of the song. The short build with the kick right before the drop has some clipping that could be fixed, also. Also, the ending was too plain and abrupt in my opinion, unless that was intentional. Looking back at the entire song, I see you do have a nice melody, and with some improvement on your bass, this could turn out pretty good!
Thanks! I'll work on the bass drop and do a re-upload in a few days.
listening to his with the bass bosted o-o
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.