Now this is something different while its not perfect this would go great for some type of game or movie, you made it work and the quality is not half bad. A short clip here that had some good voices, could be used on some flashes in the portal, Now while this here is the end of this particular audio, I would like to say that it was a pleasure hearing this to the end, I got a good kick out of this.
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Well as this was a good piece that works for a number of things, improving on a clip like this would be hard, but lets see what I come up with. I could actually see you ad somewhat more of the voices into this, maybe a tad longer with more content.
To be completely honest I feel some good urgency and drama projected by that tone and manner of voice being used. So after hearing that I merely have one question. May I use this in my upcoming machinima trailer? I ask just out of politeness and respect to you.
Yes you may. I hope that this isnt too long to respond to this.
Was this your first audio? If so, good job.
Yes sir! Thank you very much for the compliment.
hey that was nice could i use it for a Repulse shooting game video? plz.
ABSOLUTLY! I am so thrilled that someone wants to use my recording!