Alright, I have to admit I didn't think this song would be great just listening to the intro. What bad practice, I know, but I like to make the beginning give a preview of what's to come or give a setting/theme for the rest of the song. Needless to say, I as NOT disappointed when I continued to listen. It reminds me of some really good keygen music if you know what I'm talking about.
I absolutely love the creativity you've put into this, reading the backstory. It's an original mesh of different song styles with one leading repeating melody, which is very catchy by the way. The middle part where it breaks into a sort of dubstep style and a different beat is cool. You have a great chord progression going on there too. We need more artists like you here. Way to go man.