Well this was interesting but was hard to hear things as it seemed distorted, but maybe that was the direction you wanted, also adding more "VOICES" for the variaty and quality of the audio would be a huge plus especially if this is a voice reel.
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While this was just one voice and very hard to hear maybe you can ad some more voices with different styles, different accents high and low pitched and just overall a mix and variaty of voices to come up with a good voice reel.
I like your audio work.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.