COULD be a good song, but your transitions are quite awkward, make them more clean, it sounds like the song ends then starts again, and around 1:30 the synth is too loud, or the vocals are too soft. And dont wait 4 beats after the transition ends. Or maybe dont have a transition at all. And there really wasnt an ending either. This song has good potential, but I'm really not feeling it right now. Brush it up a bit and it would be a lot better. Mastering is key if anything.