I like the twinkle, however I think you should have tried different percussion or maybe stripped it out. This song could sound like alot of things.
I really like those strings! The beat is good too and i like the part where it changed to like "slow motion".
Your "bell" pattern i think could have been a little longer and a little more varied. The "beep" sound reminded me of someone getting and operation :D
All in all you did a great job on this track, keep it up!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.