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I'm Not Coming Down (preview)

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...started out with dark possibilities, but I'm feeling too good to write in a minor key!



I'm not so sure about this, to be honest.

I can see where you're coming from, but that might just be the problem - I feel you're making it too obvious that you're working against the "clarity rules", so to speak. It's mainly the distortion on the hi-hat that I feel is too much in-your-face-lo-fi. The drums are very loud in the mix too, and the combination for me goes just a little beyond acceptable experimentalism, tending toward insulting the listener, and I'm not exactly one to turn down some good old noise.

I do like the whole goofy synth idiom, and the melodies are very good. It would be awesome if you take some time to fugue-ishly build up some weird harmonies using several themes, once in a while resorting to chaotic atonality. Ideas like these are best executed with lots of virtuosity, which I know you're perfectly capable of.

Just my $0.02, of course. And I'll even fifify to counter the zero-voting it already seems to have endured. There's how much I love ya.

Oh and e-mail me about the CD swapping. My e-mail is now in my profile too.

attemptedperfection responds:

thanks for your honesty, and for the review; I haven't exactly put much effort into this, and I guess it shows... I just kinda started out with the idea to use four different bass drums... *shrugs*

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Credits & Info

3.00 / 5.00

Apr 23, 2006
9:57 AM EDT
File Info
1,009.2 KB
1 min 17 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.