I don't know man, I actually liked the lyrics. I think the counter melodious vocals made the little tune appearing between the chanting of "all of them were plagued" so rewarding in contrast, it really becomes something you just wait for and savor, a great hook. The supporting melody in the background is eerie and evil as fuck. Instrumentally there's not a thing wrong, the vocals fits the genre well and I guess the lyrics suit your image. Maybe it's just me not looking into it far enough, but there is a certain depth I like in listening to lyrics. If you could find a balance point between being insanely menacing and yet relatable I would hype your shit to pieces.
Well actually these are kind of ''Getting Old'' records
That's why we work our asses out to release ''Making You A Machine''
wich is an evolved album of ''Musical Seizure'' including vocals for each songs
Just be patient :P we are carving this black diamond with care
Thought it had some promise before the vocals came in.
I'm not complaining about the fucked-up dirty sound, you just sound like you're trying WAY too hard.
We've invented the concept of melody for a reason, and straining so hard to break it? It seems almost counter-intuitive....
At least it works during the chorus...
Sorry if i come off as an ass to you, but I'm better at pointing out the bad, y'know?
Have a nice day
Well this isn't a Final version.
How foolish would it be from us to say THIS IS the shit.
We're still working on to make this sound satisfying
I just wanted to give you all , a little teaser.
I must say I thank you for pointing the bads
You make my day.
Sounds like Combichrist. I like it alot.
You're good at making audios...shoul be on the radio....
hmph , we would be soooooooooo censured..
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.