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A song I have been working on for quite a while.

Use freely and credit when needed. If you are going to rate it below 4 please give a review, that's all I ask.


i liked it man good tune. normally i find that effects are overused and over emphasized, even in all of my older works. but in this one i feel you could fill it up with a few more sweeps especially at the break at 1:40 and maybe instead of fading the song out for a minute, give or take. break it down slowly and keep the energy up as much as you can till the end.

its all a matter of what you like though, thats just what I would do. good work either way man!

DJM4C responds:

thank you, I could use the advice for the future. Cheers! :)

Why at 1:40 is there so much silence ?! Not a single beat, the last time I heard something like this, that was just a bad editing and there was a huge blank.
And at 2:29 there is a mix between two tones, which I personnaly believe sounds quite awkward... But the tenth time, it's sound quite normal (I loop it, since I start to wrote), sadly, I don't often listen 10 time before I rate ... And maybe it's the same for you, when you record it (I hope you didn't do it in just one shot), and the tenth time you try, you find it pretty good..

[Sorry if I desappoint you, I'm not a musician]
[And obviously, Sorry for the bad English, I'm french]

DJM4C responds:

there wasn't complete silence..... if you have headphones you should be able to hear that the sound is building up, and the mix of the 2 tones is part of the song, it's just something new I tried out to be different. bad editing? but, whatever, thanks for the review!

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4.18 / 5.00

May 16, 2012
7:08 PM EDT
File Info
4.9 MB
4 min 17 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.