Originality: Well, I'll give you this, it's a very original battle piece and adds somethign to the genre. Nice job...in this categorie.
Diversity: I know it's techno and everything, and I love techno, one of my fav. genres, but seriously, this repeats, TOO MUCH, even for me.
Clarity: It may be the program you use, I don't know, but it wasn't crystal clear, but it wasn't bad either.
Effort: Well, I think you could have maybe put some more effort towards it. It's enough if you just want an average piece, but for those platinum hits out there, this isn't good enough.
Overall: Average, this piece is very much average. I'll review your other songs tomorrow as well and I look forward to hearing them. And BTW, I gave this a four out of five on the other rating. And if you think this rating is harsh, you should find some of my other ones. And since this IS your first piece on Newgrounds, I'll give you that. But if you truly want to be good, this stuff has got to be more diverse definentaly and find a better program IF that was the case of this.
I totally agree with you here 100%.
It's definitely an average track at best in my mind. I feel it's decent but definitely not platinum or gold material. I also agree that this needs more diversity too.
The main problem with it not being crystal clear is because since the program is not on this computer, I end up recording them via microphone and then trying my best to touch them up in Audacity. I think it's definitely time to upgrade. =P
Thanks for your criticism. I appreciate it very much. And actually, I'm surprised I've gotten such decent ratings thus far really.