I agree with below.
This is off to a good start, but a bit repetitive for my tastes. And, like I said, I agree with the below statements. It actually almost sounds like background music in a Doom or Unreal or Quake game (excluding voice and the intro sounds.
The levels of the track seems wrong. It is not loud enough, and it gets verry annoying in the middle of a MP3. Your volume should peak at 0 db all the way for at least the main parts. But I don't think that the bass "muddles" up the mix, it's just a sound level problem.
But if it is really the bass that muddles everything, sidechain the thing, it'll be all right.
Good job on this!
You have a great idea and a great base for the track. Just remember that Dubstep is between 140 bpm and 150 bpm. As well you might want to work on your EQing and mix down. Bass heavy music is nice but not when it gets in the way and muddles up the rest of the frequencies. But I like the over all idea of it! Keep working!
thanks for your comment :)