The low end pad that drones on throughout the entire song gets tiring. Try replacing it with something new and more interesting. Add some variation to the chants. New notes?
I see that the main foray of yours is into glitch effects. Try bringing that out more, then. This is coming along.
Really appreciate the review, I definitely see what you're talking about with both those points. And thanks!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.