I actually liked the intro.
That was pretty good. The drop was great!
It would help if you told us when the drop was(sense you want us to skip the intro.... which, if you admit that that isnt good,then why not do your best to improve it?
It sounds good after the drop(which is at 0:50 or so), but you seriously need to improve the part before that. Also starts sounding sparse a bit near the end in the last 40 sec.
Perhaps I'll find some more motivation to finish it then. Thanks :)
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