Comet . . . That nasty little gurgling sound totally jacked up that song, I'm sorry. And s Evil-Dog said, I belive him when he says you really don't put much time and effort in your songs. Or, at least it doesn't sound like it.
I gave this song a 6/10 just becuase of that gurgling sound, but everything else (like the beat) was good. But that GURGLING SOUND!!!!
Make a remix of this, wihtout thast gurgling sound & with a melody, then I'll give you maybe a 9+/10, ^-^