The second part. Please review and vote (also on my other submissions, thanks)
NICE!
There was a beautiful piano part at the end. The different parts of the song are variing in there sound in a cool way! From dark parts, over faster parts, into harmonic party, passing cool dissonant party up to the quiet, a little bit sad, ending! COOL!
It is Progressive Metal, so thats the effect it should have, thanks a lot for your good review! It's not the final version, I'm still working on it. Come back when it's done, maybe you'll like it, I hope so! cya
All in all verry verry good!
the drum part in the beginning sounded a little bit strange, but all in all that was a great song (this one reminded me of dream theatre :) )! go and get a guitar or something, i really like your work! keep on going!...
Yeah maybe, I should be ashamed because I'm a drummer in a band! I like it... But thanks for reviewing!! (p.s.: I really was inspired be dream theater ;) )
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
NietzschesErbe 
Shiverwar 
