WUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUBBBBBBBBBBBB BBBB!!!!!! Ding.

Your kicks have some serious bass to it, nice track.

I TOLD YOU BILLY

I TOLD YOU MOTHERFUCKER

Goodness, I haven't heard some real drum & bass on NG in a while. You definitely have potential, the ideas and sounds in this song are great. The rhythm of the bass that comes in at 1:10 is a little sloppy but it has the right idea and the sound itself is awesome. I like your pads, percussion, and overall atmosphere, it's well done. Near the end of the song the pads slightly overpower the drums but it's not a huge issue. The mixing in this is pretty solid too, good job!

Shibumi

Great song!

The track is very active in terms of elements. However, there is a fallback that puts the song down: The frequencies. A major part of the song escapes from the headphones. When I put my headphones at a certain distance, I can hear the high frequencies very loudly.

Try to preserve the song elements more inside the headphones and don't let them escape through them. Pressure your headphones into your ears and you'll notice a decent change.
If you manage to do so, you won't hear much when you distance from the headphones, which means that the song, as a whole, is accommodated inside them.

Cheers!