You should really cut down the low frequencies and find a decent bass for this. The "Hurr" sound in the background is very annoying. Otherwise it's good although a bit too repeative.
thanks i appreciate the review, i will definitely take that into consideration. And i know its repetitive, its just a very short loop repeating a bunch of times lol i plan on working on this more tho and expanding it into an actual song. its kinda funny you commented on this...i was just looking at one of your tracks earlier today :P