Right off the bat, sound great. A mysterious air, but a happy and complete vibe as well.
The guitar should have kept going with the synth! At least in the background of the track... There is no connection between the two parts at 1:22. Too bad.
As a guitarist myself, I can relate to why this is a difficult track to play. One thing you probably should try to work on is in the guitar part that plays the chords you should really try to make the chords sustain longer then their own bar. Don't "choke" the chord the moment you finish playing it. A great example of a player who does that great is Anouk's guitar player on her song "Nobodys Wife".
Sound-Wise sound pretty good, although some spring reverb might have been awesome to add to the vibe. The percussion could have been a bit stronger in the mix. Besides that, the sound is really good and complete.
Overall, a really really cool song, with a very interesting melody and chord progression. I'm just in a critical mood today :P Keep it up!
Thanks! I'll try my best to take these points into consideration!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.