I was waiting for the final drop to seal the intro but then it never came and it leaped right away into outro at 2:25 or so. This song doesn't seem finished. Add a 'chorus' kind of thing in the middle with kick and snare and all that and it'll be much better!
I feel that I say this a lot but It must be said!
I enjoyed listening to this.
It was fun.
I feel that some more time needs to be put into mastering the sounds. I listened to it really loud, on my (newly acquired!~~! :D kind of expensive) speakers that i bought purely to make mastering more precise, and some levels are just off. Maybe take a listen to each track individually and figure out where you want it to sit in the mix and put it there. I rambled I think and I REFUSE to proofread.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.