Not bad, but could use a few improvements.
As a fan of Psytrance, I have to admit that while it's not up to par with what Tom Olive, Ocular Nebula, Theta4, and Gloony have done; it has the makings of something magnificent. Of course, why did you submit this under classical? (Just curious)
Instrumentation: You have the psytrance sounds down perfectly and it felt like something that made by Astral Projection, Hallucinogen, Infected Mushroom, or Penta. However, there are some issues that need to be mentioned. First of all, while the percussion may be a bit loud, that could have been intentional. Second, those Matrix soundbytes felt superfluous and shoehorned in.
Composition: To your merit, I loved what you did from the 5:18 mark and onward. Those melodies were really catchy and felt really natural. On the other hand, most of the song felt too dependent on both the aforementioned soundclips and overpowered drums.
Other: Not much else to mention with this aside from it being very odd to see a psytrance song in the classical section. Of course, I would understand if you had some actual instruments mixed in this.
-The melodies that kicked in at the 5:18 mark are excellent.
-Could have used stronger melodies
-The drums are a bit loud though that could be intentional
-Those Matrix sound clips felt tacked on and superfluous.
Overall: This may not be the best psytrance song on NG, but it doesn't justify the low score. (2.24) Here's an eight from me. (4/5)
I couldn't deal with the song, I listened to all but four seconds. I know people think putting a part or parts from a matrix movie is exciting but it really isn't. The movie is old, It's not even relevant in todays world other then being a pioneer for slow motion fight scenes. Being critical about the music, I can't understand it. There's no flow, there's not a single part through out the song where I feel like maybe this song will get better. It's a generic hard style. For how upbeat the song is, its just not up to par with music being produced these days. That's it.
its only symbolic