Very nice :). I'm detecting a hint of Scarborough Fair...or is that just me?
You are right! Scarborough Fair is indeed in Dorian mode, and was an inspiration for this song. Although this song differs quite a bit from Scarborough Fair and is quite unique in its own right.
I love the simplicity within this piece. It is very laid back and the percussion/piano background only adds to it. My only complaint is that it isn't very ear-catching, if you know what I mean. It is hard to just sit down and listen to it, but it is an amazing BG song. Very well done!
I love the beats good job*thumbs up*
Percussion is too "loud," repetitive, and it's stealing the spot light and contradicting from the very laid back melody. The melody is simple and memorable, could use a chorus segment to reenforce it.
Thanks for the critique! :D
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.