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One of my better songs. 7th song with fl studio, 3rd upload to newgrounds. Constructive criticism is always appreciated. Thank you for listening :)/


Not bad, very trance like with a touch of house a mixture some what.
Smooth sounding sort of strange transition at 1min in though..
It has a very classic old school sounding feel to it which I like
but yeah so sort of strange transitioning between the 2 sections other then that the chords and progression are great much better then what I could of done at the moment. So sounds great a tad bland but overall decent track! keep practicing and you will do even better in the future.

I liked some bits of it. The chords and instruments are nice and it's got this nice punchy kick.

But the problem is I can't really tell which is intro and where the real song starts.

At around 0:50 (when the snare goes out) or so it sounds as if the song had just started over. Also around 1:05 or so the stopping is a bit too instant and again it gives the feeling that the song just started over because I was expecting a drop rather than another careful build-up.

It also needs a main melody over the chords, maybe something with a soft synth. The bass should be present more since right now you can only hear it for 30 like seconds or so.
The noise effect is used a bit too much I think and because of that it sounds pretty random at times. Use it only at the drop points and you should consider sidechaining it to the kick. Also besides noise you can use some crashes and reverse crashes to make the drop bigger.

Keep it up! Work on the song structure.

Hey man,
the Sound is not bad and i like the Melody, but i miss some Percussions.

It sounds a bit empty.

Keep up the good Work

4/5 + dl


Love it, just try to make an intro and outro so it can be mixed. :)
The white noise gets a little too loud, try turning it down a notch and be careful with the echoes, they can unbalance the main beat.
Go wild with the sfx too. It's a lovely tune, but I'd say it's more dance than it is house...

Wow, great music man, keep it up!

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Credits & Info


4.52 / 5.00

May 9, 2012
1:52 AM EDT
File Info
3.7 MB
3 min 14 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.