It's all about synth creation. That synth you start leading with at 1:03 is awesome. The others sound like stuff I've heard before...but the melody is right on. Try some different synths. I would also do something with the snare, cuz it's not as strong as it should be. Try doubling it with a tighter snare to give it some more snap.
Its actually the same synth, just different effects :P this is still a work in progress tho, i am making the snares louder, also the synths will be a little more powerful, its hard to get them to sound exactly how i want but im learning. Thats a good idea using a second snare to make it a little more noticeable. I should be finishing this up within the next week or so depending on how much time i have
Anyways, thanks a lot for the review! i appreciate the feedback