Good, the start seemed a little generic but then again it is a "general rock song". All in all though it was alright. At points it seemed like it didn't go anywhere and it stopped really abruptly. I would have said spend a bit more time working on this one.
You did better concerning rhythm in this song than in the other song. I noticed a bit of off tuning at like 1:20 when the bass wasn't there to cover. I would say for this one just make sure the tuning is spot on. OTher than that, can't wait to hear what you do with this one. Sounds really good. Again, great chord progressions.